The Queen Is Broken

By Elf

And she cries at the betrayel,
and screams at the hurt,
but it is all to no avail,
the damage has been done,
the pain is of the worst.
the queen is broken.

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Copyright 2003 Elf
Published on Friday, November 7, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: nice job...

  • rondant On Sunday, February 27, 2005, rondant (58)By person wrote:

    nice work on this...Ronda

  • IceDragoness On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    I've definately been here.. ~Dawn

  • Exodus On Friday, November 7, 2003, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    I really like this...good job..

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