Addicted to the Pain

By Elf

The pain swallows me up,
and I'm drowning in it,
and I hurt,
and I silently scream,
but I don't want it to go away,
because I'm addicted to the pain.

And when the psychiatrist,
solemn and serious behind his desk,
prescribes the pills,
I don't want to take them,
because I don't want it to go away,
because I'm addicted to the pain.

I know it's unhealthy,
but I feel empty,
without the pain,
as I've become used to it,
and I don't want it to go away,
because I'm addicted to the pain.

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Copyright 2003 Elf
Published on Monday, November 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • toy soldier On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, toy soldier (26)By person wrote:

    i dont know what to say... so deep so real.-toy

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, November 8, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    an honest account of an honest soul.....your addiction makes for beautiful prose.....hmmm, pain is beauty? ............urban

  • Demosthenes On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    ive told you you write like a song. you do. and i fear some people will avoid this write with thoughts that its a cutting poem, but since im pretty dang sure its not, loveness. -B

  • Elf On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    you are right-it's not. Thank you.

  • Demosthenes On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    aw look, the B is all alone on its line. sad. -B

  • A former member wrote: Nice write :) I like :)

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