NIGHTLY IDEAS

By fritzwraith

Madame Maxine had a rough day
for things didnÂ’t go her way.
Forty winks she needed most
in her slumber by the post.

In her thoughts appeared a plan
to liquidate that abusive clan.
They wrecked her expensive weaponry
and called her studies bad alchemy.

Then appeared her dead husband, Alonzo
wearing his cherished pants and poncho.
“Don’t forget to throw them in the cartels
and give them your exploding parcels!”


The sunÂ’s rays touched her lids,
waking her up in a pillow of beads.
A smug smile played on her lips
while her plan is up for keeps.

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Copyright 2003 fritzwraith
Published on Saturday, October 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • aXe FactoR On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, aXe FactoR (333)By person wrote:

    like the story-telling way of this poetry. nice and vivid visuals. -MeL-

  • A former member wrote: this was a rather interesting read... what inspired this if i may ask... very good, flawless rhyme pattern. well done

  • fritzwraith On Sunday, November 9, 2003, fritzwraith (24)By person wrote:

    I wrote this more than a year ago after reading an article about torture methods in an old issue of Soldier of Fortune. There is actually a Madame Maxine but my poem is a fictionalized about her. I'm not sure if she has a husband.

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