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+Left For Dead+
By Domenta
The space around me feels heavy
I draw a breath and all I can do is gasp
the air is thick with a toxicity
as I fall suffocating
from the poisons
from just a kiss
I reach out
For a hand
that feels as though it is no longer there
Were you ever really?
I'm left comatose
trapped in a space that eats away at my flesh
boring into me
the pain of a thousand kisses
Filled with lies
I try to hide this suffering
but its becoming a louise disguise
as I bleed a portrait of your deceit
For all to see
Its beginning to mock me
making me the fool
when all I did
I did for you
but it was never enough
Nothing ever was
But here I lay
crying
trying
And now I'm left dying
for the one who tore my heart out
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On Sunday, December 30, 2018, Sorrowful Jester
(143)
wrote:
I've just read a poem where a guy used the opposite way a word that I wrote on the chatter. plus his ideas where utterly stupid. And now this? Why? Why are there no comments on this one? I said I'd rate with 5 the pretty good ones so that I had numbers left for better ones. Would it be okay to give you an 8-9 in case I read something better? I love it. You most certainly have been through such a "love". If so, keep hoping and trying, there's someone for almost every one of us out there.
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On Sunday, December 30, 2018, Domenta
(9) wrote:
Thank you so much for the comment a lot of my poetry tends to come from how I really feel and sadly with everything going on its just being honest and truthful again I greatly appreciate the love
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On Monday, December 31, 2018, Sorrowful Jester
(143) wrote:
I can tell by reading it. it's TRUE
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