A seductive suicide

By Half-Dead Agonist

A bright sun beams down on me,
Along with many others,
That walk this worn trail,
Tread by so many before us.

A longing whisper within throws me to the side,
Of the path seen too often,
My feet step upon few twigs,
And my head glides under the branches.

Soon I see a waterfall,
Far away from the chosen path,
And it welcomes me into its waters,
So I step into its gentle warm bath.

I leave some traces of my presence,
And the night has fallen fully,
The brightest star falls behind the moon,
As I let the water flow over me.

The sun no longer rises,
The moon and star stand unchanging,
And all I do is swim,
I swim in the night alone.

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Copyright 2003 Half-Dead Agonist
Published on Sunday, September 21, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • prodigy789 On Friday, July 6, 2012, prodigy789 (31)By person wrote:

    The imagery was so wonderful. It actually reminds me of a waterfall not too far from home. great job!

  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    well, its not really a suicide except a getting away for a little while.. i liked it thogh

  • A former member wrote: can i go with you? you can bring yours and i can bring mine. ~jul-bug

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