A seductive suicide
By Half-Dead Agonist
A bright sun beams down on me,
Along with many others,
That walk this worn trail,
Tread by so many before us.
A longing whisper within throws me to the side,
Of the path seen too often,
My feet step upon few twigs,
And my head glides under the branches.
Soon I see a waterfall,
Far away from the chosen path,
And it welcomes me into its waters,
So I step into its gentle warm bath.
I leave some traces of my presence,
And the night has fallen fully,
The brightest star falls behind the moon,
As I let the water flow over me.
The sun no longer rises,
The moon and star stand unchanging,
And all I do is swim,
I swim in the night alone.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 Half-Dead Agonist
Published on Sunday, September 21, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A seductive suicide"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Friday, July 6, 2012, prodigy789
(31) wrote:
The imagery was so wonderful. It actually reminds me of a waterfall not too far from home. great job!
-
On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
well, its not really a suicide except a getting away for a little while.. i liked it thogh
-
A former member wrote:
can i go with you? you can bring yours and i can bring mine. ~jul-bug