The flickiring flame

By Steakfry15

There is a fire a fire that burns in my heart 
Although this fire soon to fall apart
The docter says im okay but i know he is lying 
I stayed up all night long 
I stayed up all night crying 
I can feel myself 
I can feel myself dying 

This once bright fire was an endless flame 
But now it has grown small and tame 
I dont yet see where my flame will go 
I do not think i will ever know
Now just like that of a T.V show 
The flame ends and goes out 
Now im laying cold as snow 


Thank you for reading :)

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Copyright 2016 Steakfry15
Published on Thursday, October 13, 2016.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • Gypsyeighty3 On Friday, October 14, 2016, Gypsyeighty3 (45)By person wrote:

    Leaves one feeling hopeless, like there is nothing to change what is happening. Very well done.

  • 10 Forty Three On Thursday, October 13, 2016, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    "This once bright fire was an endless flame But now it has grown small and tame." Well said. Great poem overall. Thanks for sharing and welcome to DP! - 10:43

  • Steakfry15 On Thursday, October 13, 2016, Steakfry15 (11)By person wrote:

    Thank you...i love your post also!

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