Boy Back From War
By BoyBackFromWar
Hello my friends.
Hello my brothers in arms.
The cracks on your
gravestones are getting
bigger as years go by.
People pass without
even a glance at you.
I can still hear the haunting cries
of your mothers, sisters, wives…
Every night I dream of a cold night.
The night in which you
were swallowed by a fiery thunder.
But in my dreams I am
going with you…
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A former member wrote:
A dark and deep write. The last line is especially profound and powerful.
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On Tuesday, August 23, 2016, BoyBackFromWar
(16) wrote:
Thakn you, it really means a lot.
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2016, Slingnasty
(137) wrote:
Wow. Resounding wow. Very deep. Write. Formulating Survivor's remorse. Spilling out in an awesomely deep well written Piece. !! Keep writing it!! Ty
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On Monday, March 21, 2016, BoyBackFromWar
(16) wrote:
Thank you for the feedback and encouragement.