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Pain
By SeventhCircle
Love
If there ever was such a thing
Surely it dwells in my breast
Drift
I can't be certain of the uncertainty
Surely my suspicion is wrong
Heartbreak
My stomach hits the floor
The sky falls down
And me with it
Pain
If there ever was such a thing
Surely it dwells in my breast
Hope for tomorrow
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Thursday, September 11, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Pain"
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On Sunday, December 28, 2003, Delilah
(113)
wrote:
AH!! I agree with everyone on this, I can't really say anything that hasn't been said, except that this is something I've been trying to write down for years and have never suceeded in doing!! And you did it in so few words...emotional..deep...and just
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On Sunday, December 28, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
plain awe-inspiring...~Delilah~
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
aww, poor justin. goodgood write, kid. -B
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written, struck a familiar chord in my heart. Just realize that tomorrow or tomorrow's tomorrow there is always another chance. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
I'd have to agree with Urban's comment on this. Beautiful. ~ mw
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
beautifully internal, solemly true......urban
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