Salty smiles

By aquiouss

He holds my face with his gnarled beauty
resting like feather ghosts on my liquid streams of consciousness
while I clutch spoons and saucepans
and mix tears with sauce
in the half light

Stroking my hair
Music plays
His touch is warm
Dinner cooks
Neurons fire
A soft smile burns into the wrinkles around my mouth
where I encounter him
as my eyelashes kiss his hands

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Copyright 2014 aquiouss
Published on Wednesday, November 26, 2014.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • aquiouss On Sunday, June 12, 2016, aquiouss (21)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your support!

  • Damon Tarloth On Saturday, November 29, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142)By person wrote:

    uniquely done :)

  • A former member wrote: Curious use of metaphors here, very much enjoyed.

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