Remembering Jon

By Nightmare_Evil

I sit on my stairs
Watching the rain fall down
So much like the tears on my face
The sky is stormy and loud
It represents my hate

The rain dampens my hair.
Your words damage my faith.
Why are you trying so hard to make me turn away?
I only wanted you to be ok.

I close my eyes to think
My thoughts that are so deep
Why can't you understand my ways?
I only wanted you to be ok
Don't you realize I'm afraid?

I want something I can never reach
I can't fully be conscience of the world around me
Nothing seems real anymore
Everything seems fake

I'm not a person anymore
I only feel pain
My greatest fear is happening
I'm lost in a world with no hope...

It's not your fault I'm crying
The rain keeps falling
It gives me the strengh to go

Here on my porch
Surrounded by dark and cold
Invigorating rain falls before my eyes
I know.. I am finally home.

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Copyright 2003 Nightmare_Evil
Published on Thursday, August 28, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: wow, that is utterly beautiful. I love it. Its expressing exactly what i've thought so many many times. I have to disagree with andrew though, i see no damn writers block!

  • _Andrew_ On Thursday, August 28, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    not bad at all, it feels like you have writers block at certain parts, still a good write but i feel you're capable to grow as a writer *~*aNDReW*~*

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