*need title*

By Kittichoo

Do ever feel the blood,
Pumping through your veins,
Does it hurt you,
Scald you,
Is living just a pain

How dare you look at me like that...
as if you can see,
do you think that I'm a joke,
that I'm wrong,
need my medicine???

Well it's you that I hate,
because you have it so easy,
you feel so little,
and you question nothing,
You will DIE NOTHING!!!

I'm everything,
I'm the world,
I'm broken and turn,
My limb are so sore,
and even my soul is scarred...
I'm me,
I'm screaming,
Wild in my ways...

I feel blood...
it's painful,
reminding me I'm alive,
You can't see it,
but it's red,
And it's flowing to drown you...

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Copyright 2003 Kittichoo
Published on Wednesday, August 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • whisperer On Sunday, November 26, 2006, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    mmmmmm.....tasty....and so nicely enraged....love it

  • A former member wrote: Do Ever Feel the Blood - this opening line sums up the entire poem; it is painful, beautiful & simply perfect. It could also bookend the poem by ending w/ it as well further spelling the pain. Nicely done.

  • nell On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    i like this, really hard to give you a suggestion for a title though...maybe "you belittled nothing"? i unno

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