The Mirror

By Alice_I_Wonder

The person looking back at me
When will it be who I am inside?
I am no longer who I once was
Lost in time, the innocence wanders.
The vessel I see is hollow, 
No life, no soul.
I see the emptiness in the eyes
The magic taken away with time.

Once, the person looking back was me
This surface lies, this is not me.

Too long since I've pondered
Who this is looking back at me
I tell myself this must be who I am
The person inside screams to come out.
When was I over taken.

This person looking back is not me.

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Copyright 2014 Alice_I_Wonder
Published on Tuesday, February 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • BloodyMercy On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, BloodyMercy (64)By person wrote:

    This feels full of contempt for who they've become. . And a certain nostalgic love for who they were. ... they need to continue down the path to grow from experiences and become a more beautiful version of the past. A decent read, thanks for posting.

  • A former member wrote: Wow I really loved this. I hope to read much more from you. Thanks for sharing

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