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"Hurt Me?"
By grantrizmo2002
Am I really here?
Please forgive me not,
The stains will wash away?
When will the hate stop?
Will it go away?
And put me on the throne?
Have you ever cared?
Have you really ever known?
Has it crossed your mind?
That I am in this cage?
Stuck back in the corner,
Carefully put in place,
Guess I must deserve it,
It all then must be true,
Hurt me so I will feel again,
Hurt me just like you.....
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Copyright 2014 grantrizmo2002
Published on Monday, January 6, 2014.
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"Poetry"
Comments on ""Hurt Me?""
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A former member wrote:
How we rely on something to make ourselves feel full this poem could describe a huge range of topics well done cheers Craig
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A former member wrote:
Consiquences of ever action, does hurt. Nice work.
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On Monday, January 6, 2014, Void Vortex
(298)
wrote:
Quite retrospective, very cleverly written! Awesome vision grantrizmo 2002, your canvas was fully utilised :] !
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A former member wrote:
This sounded very sorrowful and as if writhing in despair...I. like your imagery and the overall way you pulled this one off....nice one
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