Evil Brilliance!

By Lady Poetry

Evil Brilliance! 
 
Once upon a dream.
There was a brightly shining star, 
Hanging in the heavens.
Above Adelphi's garden.
In the garden was a tree.
Upon which hung a golden ring.
Caught the eye of scavenger.
A bird who snatched the ring away.
Dropped it in her nest.

Those baby birds they wriggled.
The nest fell to the floor.
Ring of gold and diamonds,
It landed on the deck.

There came a thief in disbelief.
Could not believe his luck.
Picked brilliant gem up, 
Wandered to the pawn shop.
What did he spy with his little eye.

It was really a porn shop.
He gave the ring to hooker sweet.
Just for a bit of fun.
She sold it to a friend
So she could buy another fix.
The fix she got was pure.
Her heroin her lure.
Got her trapped.
Stuck in the mix.
Death,
It stopped her turning tricks.

The dealer discarded the ring from his pocket.
Maybe feeling guilty.
Came back the magpie bird.
The bird of vengeful scavenging.
Picked trinket up in her beak.
Took back to her tree.
There you found it.
Stole it back.
That brilliant gold was really black!

By ladylivvi1

 

© 2013 ladylivvi1 (All rights reserved)

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Copyright 2013 Lady Poetry
Published on Tuesday, December 31, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I enjoyed penning this x
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  • A former member wrote: My, it really seems true, no? What comes around, goes around.... What an evil ring! Lol Very enjoyable read!

  • Lady Poetry On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, Lady Poetry (38)By person wrote:

    I promise you it was just a write... It actually started off to be a love poem, but it kind of changed shape xx I'm glad you enjoyed it!

  • A former member wrote: Im almost totally sure I was the original purchaser of said ring... I gave it to this really sweet woman 15 years ago... 15 minutes later, her "sweet" was just as black as the gold you mentioned in this wonderful write...

  • Lady Poetry On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, Lady Poetry (38)By person wrote:

    Btw Vera picscis I'm actually kind of sweet and not black at all...I just have a penchant for writing dark!

  • Lady Poetry On Wednesday, January 1, 2014, Lady Poetry (38)By person wrote:

    Hiya... It was just a piece of fantasy...It was going to be a love poem but it changed design...my imagination got the better of me! I'm so glad you enjoyed it x

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