Hey You!

By Lady Poetry

Hey You! 


Pick up that gun.
Pull the trigger.
See who is going to be first, 
The first one to snigger.
Hey you.
Shaking in your pixie boots.
Do you think she’s gonna shoot.

Wry smile creeps.
From eyes that don’t weep.
That peep around corners.
Abridged by the mourners.

Hey you.
Is she feeling blue.
Is she gonna run a main line.

Leaving tracks from vacant trains.
A fix to write all wrongs.
No man.
Chemical solutions never fixed the pain.
No needles ever entered her sweet veins.

Mortal remains of love unchanged.

By ladylivvi1



© 2013 ladylivvi1 (All rights reserved)

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Copyright 2013 Lady Poetry
Published on Sunday, December 22, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Good one. Keep it up.

  • A former member wrote: good write, I like the rhyme scheme! write on!

  • A former member wrote: Playing chicken, great way to challenge yourself to the utmost extremes. A much enjoyed read.

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