your anger (real version)
By jennifer atwood
Confessions of anotheer day,Bold and anger come my way.....I need not hear
now what you say, leave your smite for another prey! Walk in the distance
from your pain, never let thy's enemy gain. Your efforts are great to
substain.
They try and flock on you. They want your soul's every being.
Black on Black will be all you see. Let me run on life's energy......Wicked
people let me be! I can be whole on bended knee. Every session from your
life has been recorded on his device.
Crazy thoughts lye in your head, so keep them dorment.....keep
them fed. A tormented heart has cast my way, Loosing breath from which
I take!
I am here now see me smile,untaim my body from it's restless
pain. Excuse my weakness, my struggles are great. Loose myself while
I wait.
I see nobody out there to reach for me. Why must you choose
to set me free? Your veil has lifted, Your face I see.....Empty eyes
where blue should be!
Souls are lost in life's deep waves, At deeps end is where
they'll stay. They seem to be life's disguarded trash, Depraved,and Evil.....The
devil's stash! Feelings lost without a home,so now they lye in wait,
no place to roam.
Ears are turned out as you speak. Leaving your efforts,and
one's patience weak. I hear you loved one, Don't feel your shame.
Ease your mind, Free your pain. It's my life now I must awake,
from long slumber, and past mistakes. Only know now no vows I break.
Engulfed in your flames of one's love, and desire, There's no restraints
from this fire! I don't know you,or your hate for me? Words spit
from your mouth Mad and Free! Caught up in one's everlasting sanity.
Will sale your soul the price is cheap, you'll never know though who the
bidders will be!?
Your mind is racing,but wanting peace, can you hear me
as I scream? Wake me from this awful dream!!
THE END
Author's Note:
when i submitted the first version of this yesterday it wasn't finished. I hope you enjoy the rest of my poem.. thankyouComments on "your anger (real version)"
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A former member wrote:
Some very powerful and raw emotions expressed, I can feel them along with you.
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
welcome to dark poetry, great start at making yourself at home.
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On Tuesday, August 6, 2013, Killerdemonchick
(53) wrote:
Wonderful! Flowed smoothly and was dark. I love this work.
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, jennifer atwood
(12) wrote:
thankyou I appreciate you taking the time to read it.I appreciate your comments