An Empty Shell That Fades By Dawn.

By MirrorEye

 Broken, shattered, twisted, torn.
An empty shell that fades by dawn.
My story begins on mid-summer's morn,
And ends with my spirit, lost and forlorn.

"I'll beat you with iron, cut you with a knife"
That was a phrase I've heard most my life.
"You'll never find happiness, never find a wife"
I tried to end it, by taking my life.

I woke up in hospital a few hours later,
To the sound of screams and the sting of a defribulator.
No one was waiting, no mother, no father.
I guess I was too unimportant to bother.

This story ends a little farther down the road.
After all my trial and error, I found a place to unload.
But after a while, my mind began to implode,
As my loneliness caused my heart to explode.

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Copyright 2013 MirrorEye
Published on Thursday, February 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

not a great work
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  • A former member wrote: Very well written. I have felt like that year's ago but hang in there you will find hope.

  • A former member wrote: Okay, I have to admit, I don't come across many poems that have this much emotion and sadness. This is just amazing and you REALLY need to write more! You have an abundance of talent.

  • MirrorEye On Friday, February 15, 2013, MirrorEye (23)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much, that really means a lot!

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