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New Premier
By QuartzAl18
WE'LL CLING TO EACH OTHER
LIKE A CHILD AND A MOTHER,
A DESPERATION
OF SEPERATION!
I FEEL I'M GOING UNDER
AND DESPAIR IS TO
SUNDER
NO ANSWERS FOR TOMORROW...
WE'LL DROWN IN OUR SORROW
I CAN'T EVALUATE
I CAN'T REGULATE
THIS IS SO TOTALLY
UNFAIR
THIS VISION IS SO UNCLEAR
THE WHOLE WORLD MAY KNOW MY
FACE
BUT I'LL ALWAYS KEEP MY OWN PACE
IN THIS HELL OF A RAT
RACE
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Copyright 2013 QuartzAl18
Published on Friday, January 18, 2013.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Rant"
Author's Note:
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A former member wrote:
i suggest keeping a single focus in the poem, but overall nice write :).
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On Friday, January 25, 2013, QuartzAl18
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wrote:
This poem refers to the sad & lonely parts of me. When i switch from we to I, its just goes to state how everything blends into one. The aspect of every emotion comes together and floods my heart at the time. So anyway I still thank you, glad you liked it.
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