Ironic

By Nightmare_Evil

Bloody eyes screaming for mercy
As the pain hits me again.
Harder and harder
Till I can't breathe anymore.

You're merciless in your hate
I did nothing to you
But try to make you understand
That I'm not there to make you mad

You hate me because I'm like you
In every way, shape, and form
And you hate who you are
So you hate me too.

My heart goes out to you
My tormentor
For I have nothing but pity
For you to take

I pity who you are
And what you have become
And who you used to be
For that person was none other than me.

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Copyright 2003 Nightmare_Evil
Published on Friday, August 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PaperPromises On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, PaperPromises (54)By person wrote:

    great job.. i love this one.. i agree with silent about the last line.. amazing work. -CW

  • silent_screams On Sunday, August 3, 2003, silent_screams (11)By person wrote:

    I really like this one, and i think it has a deeper meaning you may or not've intended. Really great last line.

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