a point so low

By ebonyshroud

A point so low
Pulled undertow
Grasped by a hand
Not of this land
Filled to the marrow
By a saddening sorrow

Or is it hate?
Revenge comes too late
Not allowed by fate

Lament i must
for it is all unjust

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Copyright 2012 ebonyshroud
Published on Monday, August 27, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Zhee On Monday, August 27, 2012, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    i agree, lovely flow, lovely thought...

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