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I must feel
By kenneth
I wish that I could say to you
That everything
will be all right
It seems like theres nothing I can do
I cant
save you with my might
All I have is my strength and loyalty
I
am not what you can call handsome
They say that I am lost in my insanity
I feel like this existance is cumbersome
I wish that I could give
to you
Happiness and love everlasting
But it seems like theres
nothing I can do
Within the darkness is growing
When was the
last timeI seen you
It has been far to long it seems
Why does
my heart dwell on you
Still I see your face in my dreams
Never
have I had your heart
And perhaps I never will
But still in the
depths of my heart
These emotions I must feel
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Copyright 2011 kenneth
Published on Saturday, August 13, 2011.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
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If I may...
In the first stanza you have an a, b, a, b rhyme scheme and you've written your last two stanzas in the same form. To make the poem flow better please consider editing stanzas two and three to fit the theme, then this read would turn from awesome to amazing(:
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