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God's Diner
By soloiq
Adam is out
on a hot date
has a good time
until the
fruit plate
Eve gets cranky
says ''I'm late
my nipples hurt
and you I hate''
He yells at
the cook
''Worst I ever ate!''
she glares in silence
at her lousy mate
He gets on up
feels low rate
she calls him a slob
he mentions her weight
It's not going good
they've sealed our fate
the meal
cost too much
and smells like bait
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Copyright 2011 soloiq
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A former member wrote:
hahahaha wonderful! made me laugh. quiet an imagination you've got there.. :)
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On Friday, July 15, 2011, Nameless Pariah
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wrote:
Very amusing. I like the way you structured this.
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