Surreal
By serenesavage91
Speak to the breeze,
hear the wind whisper back.
Watch time slowly
freeze,
and light fade to black.
Dead flowers springs to life,
and colors run like water,
Hold your wrist against the knife,
feel how your blood gets hotter.
watch the ruby bead,
Trace
a path down your skin
escape the pain as you bleed,
free it from
within.
Vibrant flowers die again,
petals fall to the floor.
The breeze will go silent then,
the wind will speak no more.
running colors all go still,
and settle into place,
you kno
your blade has made its kill,
with a smile on your face
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Copyright 2011 serenesavage91
Published on Monday, March 14, 2011.
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Comments on "Surreal"
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A former member wrote:
Superb use of imagery and flow, I love it. Bookmarking.
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A former member wrote:
Powerful and Relative!
Intensely brilliant Well Rendered!
Thanks for the Consideration
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A former member wrote:
"You know your blade has made its kill. with a smile on your face." --Pure talent--
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A former member wrote:
"Speak to the breeze, hear the wind whisper back. Watch time slowly freeze, and light fade to black." - Beautiful!
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On Monday, March 14, 2011, serenesavage91
(33) wrote:
Awe thanks!
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A former member wrote:
Life and Death is always such an interesting and emotional subject. You are a very good poet... never stop!