Crazy forest
By PoisonInk
Black snow was falling. The tree line
shone when I turned to see -
I had wondered long and silent,
alone, trailing memory behind me.
And it seemed the stars, fixed as they were,
ground their
teeth, a stiffened nexus,
an infernal machine, tolling
the halted
hours of conciousness.
Then, a thick silence descends,
and
my every gesture
leaves a comet tail in the heavens.
And
I hear evey glance I cast
as it echoes against
some tree.
Child, what were you seeking there,
with your gangly arms
and pointed shoulders
on which the wings were barely dry -
black
snow drifting in the evening sky.
A horizon howling, far from
view,
darting its tongues and anthracite,
dragged me forever
down the mute row,
my body, half naked, sliding from sight.
In distances of smoke the town afire,
blazing beneath the planes,
a frigid pyre.
We two, forest, what did we do?
Why did they
burn you, forest, in a toga of ash -
and the moon no longer passes
over you?
Comments on "Crazy forest"
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A former member wrote:
i concur with evangeline. Good poem though. held my attention, Your rhyming scheme is for the most part very lyrical. Some parts are clunky, but then, as Evangeline said, proofreading can fix that. Good write all in all.