Unwords

By PoisonInk

I wrote them with my nail on walls
In the empty alcoves,
In the dark and in solitude,
without the solicitude
of the bull, the lion or the eagle
that worked so eager
for Luke, Mark and John.


These are verses without time,
Verses of the dust,
Of terrible thirst
And hunger for the ashes that burnt,
Verses of this very moment.
When my celestial nail was worn blunt and low
I wanted to let it grow
And it never grew back in place -
Or maybe I couldn’t recognize its face.



It was dark. In the distance, outside, I could hear the rain.
And my hand felt like a claw through the pain,
Incapable to extend,
So I forced myself to write with the nails of my left hand.
 

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Copyright 2010 PoisonInk
Published on Tuesday, December 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • XOCHITL On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, XOCHITL (40)By person wrote:

    Grate piece!!! And the title is just as captivating and your work . Well done

  • Constance_ On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, Constance_ (2)By person wrote:

    This is breathtaking, I was captive from the first word~~

  • Ladyhawke On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    This was amazing. Its great. The imagery in this when you read it is. . .unbelievable. Thanks for sharing:)

  • A former member wrote: mmmm quite a vision here... so tangibly developed... is there faith in unwords.... is there an undoing that cannot be undone... when the blood of abraded finger tips punctuates the thoughts that cannot be but written... that cannot be but codified in the name of the fallen world. there is tenacity here in this absence of the lion and bull.... but something takes flight.... this soars. Thank you for sharing.

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