Lot
By PoisonInk
I have seen many and sin-breeding deeds
profaning the light and the
wind,
and misunderstood customs, and fire games in the city.
Naked
people have I seen in rusty-copper green lakes
kissing silvery swans.
I have seen, fear-stricken, in front of the gate,
Girls dancing
their whiteness off
for long nailed kings-
and I have seen priests
in linen clothes intoxicating
the beggars with the wine the dead have
been washed with.
I have seen women setting their seed on fire
their mission cast between two eternities like an insult,
their
breasts-ripe fruit with no milk, no milk within,
their breath killing
bees and herbs.
I have seen transparent guests on the shore
of blood:
children who will be delivered but are not desired
(if
you stop your ears up
you can hear through spheres their bitter thirst,
their dumb murmur at the world's windows,
and their song of relief
when they find entrance
in trees, dogs, and in birds).
I have
heard many and sin-breeding words
profaning the light and the wind.
Alas, sons of the cities, you think that
no one has seen the
sun ever,
and that clear light is nothing but a tale.
Your questions
stir the depths,
and you hurt with stones the voiceless eyes of the
wells,
but you cannot guess from their silence
the unexpected
ending.
Alas, sons of the cities, in any deed
you deny
the Earth its heavenly descent.
You haven't feasted the angels come
with the Eucharist,
you haven't cleaned their dusty wings,
but
scolded them instead-cruelly plucking their feathers
and bedizened
in them, you dance and dance
around the golden streets of the accursed
calves.
It will not be seven days, it will not be seven days.
Woe is me that I have to wait.
My flocks of sheep and my live coals
will sink into the sea.
I can hear my dogs barking from the bottom
of the sea.
Alas, my God, for I have to hold my words
when I
strip naked.
The woman shall turn into a salt pillar
when looking
back.
Comments on "Lot"
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A former member wrote:
aletheia....... such is the removing of the veil.... the dis.covering of all that bleeds before me.... so many wondrous images here.... so richly laden with antiquated meanings and whispers that leap from pages of books long since discarded, long since buried in languages that no longer call with the birds..... gorgeous read. Maybe we should not look back?
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A former member wrote:
There are many brilliant words here, just one example, "you haven't cleaned their dusty wings,
but scolded them instead-cruelly plucking their feathers
and bedizened in them"
It sounds especially strong due to imitation of the scriptures style.
I found this writing outstanding.
Thank you,
Pavel