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A Taste Of You
By kissinggirl
I drank from your lips
your poison slowly drips
i
feel it hot, pulsing through my veins
grasping the sheets
toes curling
you course through me
filling
me with your pain
your eyes watching
teeth skimming
my skin
burning
tears slip down my cheek
mix with your sweat
i now belong to you my darling
i could just die
you smile
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Copyright 2010 kissinggirl
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A former member wrote:
Wow u rock I love this
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Oh, this is beautiful!! The point of being turned, the point of being taken, owned, enslaved by the one you love. So erotically portrayed. I know this feeling so well, you worded it so simply, so perfectly. I have to favor this one. -Michael
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
"An overwhelming state is burning through my every vein, mine's the pleasure as I force feed her all my pain..." Poisonblack - Nail. I couldn't help but think of this song after I read this. -Michael
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On Monday, December 6, 2010, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Filling me with your pain. Just like poetry. Welcome to DP
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A former member wrote:
sexy.... in a loving/spiritual kind of way, maybe... so much emotion.... such a feeling.... to be treasured perhaps. Carefully composed. Weclome to the valley, well done.
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