My Fault

By Nightmare_Evil

It's my own fault I'm dying
That my blood is pouring on the floor.
Lost in my own thoughts
Because I know nothing more.

It's my fault I'm miserable.
It's my fault you're miserable too.
Bad luck follows me like a disease
You were so happy before you met me.

My mere existence ruins your life.
As if it wasn't enough that I ruined my own.
How much can one person handle?
How much love can you take away?

I've already lost what I had
Why doesn't the world just take me?

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Copyright 2003 Nightmare_Evil
Published on Thursday, June 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Enigma On Saturday, April 7, 2007, Enigma (90)By person wrote:

    mann that was great, i can compare to that feeling at times. VERY GOOD WORK.

  • A former member wrote: you don't sound like you're new to writing dark poetry... this is actually pretty damned good. keep it up, it'll be worth it sooner than you think.

  • A former member wrote: Love is farking confusing! Yes? No?

  • A former member wrote: yes!!

  • nell On Thursday, June 12, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    wow, the way you describe this sadness is amazig. agreed i have felt this too many times.

  • blackdarkness On Thursday, June 12, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    I have felt this way many times...i love it great write

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