Dying in your Sleep
By Inzlo
I've heard some people talk and
say things like
"at least he went peacefully" or
"When I die
I want to die in my sleep, so there is no pain"...
Well
I'd laugh in their faces and push them aside
If they had only been
there with me the night that I died
Dying in your sleep is
not peacefull at all
You just lie there in pain unable to call
You can't open your eyes or scream or cry
you know that soon
you'll be covered in flies
I've never felt so alone, not that
I can recall
like when they found my body as stiff as a wall
I heard a voice say "Well he's in a better place"
YOU DON'T FUCKING
KNOW, CAUSE YOU'VE NEVER BEEN IN MY PLACE!
I just wish I could have lived
to tell you about it...
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Copyright 2010 Inzlo
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On Thursday, September 9, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
interesting idea, great write, definitely got the point across, i guess it all depends were you go when you die. possibly.