Beautiful drowning
By Karmadreams
The color
of your eyes draws me in deeper
deeper into this sea of sensation,
lifting me up
taking me down, drowning the sound of this world
the sound of my heart beating, my breath stopping
I’m swept away, carried through stars
of time
to a world of wonder, a world of love……….
it
washes over me in waves almost unbearable
so intense, I feel myself
drifting off in oblivion
Your hands on my hips makes me forget
I fall
deeper into this ocean, drowning
tides taking me in, deeper and
deeper
into our world, where the smell of the earth
clings
to your skin, so close to mine
The taste of your lips on mine, oh god
I feel
myself lost in you, holding on with only a breath
this is crazy,
the way you make me feel
every touch bringing the stars closer……………..
As our dance
begins, the passion burns my skin
the cold of the ocean far away,
the stars calling our names
every beat of our hearts as one, a
single tear in my eye
and I finally surrender to this beautiful
drowning……………..
Comments on "Beautiful drowning"
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A former member wrote:
this is very very very beautiful. Alot of innocence and alot of passion.
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A former member wrote:
mmmm a touch of the erotic upon the dreams of the romantic.....star called lovers.....take their last breath...... is love not an undulating..... encompassing.... potentially suffocating.... emotion. I think you may want "make" when the hands on your hips awake forgetfulness.... such a watery escape.... well done.