F.I.N.E

By Dick_in_my_Ass

Okay, i know i'm not exactly....well good at poetry, but since this is a poetryr sight, i think i'll take a crack at a poem..... don't kill me.....


I'm Fine


I hear the beating of you're heart
It beats like mine
I see the blood on your wrist
I asked you what was wrong and you replied
"I'm fine"


Frantic
Insecure
Neurotic and
Emotional

Yes, I see that you're just fine
Even though your eyes scream at me to help
But since you didn't ask oh well
I guess I'm going to hell

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Copyright 2010 Dick_in_my_Ass
Published on Saturday, July 3, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Rowan On Saturday, July 3, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    I doesn't matter if you're good at poetry or not. I think the object is to express oneself in the form of writing and you do that. I actually like your stories. Write on.

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