'You'
By firsthand_account
It's been so long
since there was a 'you'
hard to live with nothing
to lose
distract myself from the lonely room
with football games
and chores to do
it's been so long since there was a 'you'
I would give so much to feel the closeness
bought with heartache
and heavy chest
the closeness that i used to resent
the jealousy
of youth as rent
but still i make no effort to
exact the
pleasure most pursue
from others i still shy away
though not
as ugly as my shame
perhaps to write a poem would
do
for me what lovers could
in the way of strong emotion
on second
thought a silly notion
but here we are and there it goes
the time still passes wounds and woes
my friends will ask about
my life
i let them down unless i lie
It's been so long
since there was a 'you'
hard to bleed without a bruise
disturbing
how the lonely choose
not to look for subtle clues
it's been
so long since there was a 'you'
Comments on "'You'"
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A former member wrote:
I love the end rhyming scheme it's very well written ^^
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A former member wrote:
this is great writing man. you've got some good talent thanks for sharing and keep it coming
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A former member wrote:
"Perhaps to write a poem would do, for me, what lovers could in the way of strong emotion; on second thought a silly notion." Not as silly as one might think :) Thank you for your poem.