Love will tear us apart

By heathenpoetry



For none will know of just where we have been,
the hardships we've kept.
the feelings we've seen.

And vowed like we did; side by side for all time,
the moment i loved you.
the moment i died.

I was so diluded should of known from the start;
lust pulled us together,
love will tear us apart.

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Copyright 2009 heathenpoetry
Published on Wednesday, November 4, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • heathenpoetry On Tuesday, January 12, 2010, heathenpoetry (9)By person wrote:

    thanks!

  • A former member wrote: The last two lines... a-m-a-z-i-n-g... Nice write :)

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