Short and gloomy 2

By demonofthefall

Unrelenting dread holding my body down as a new day signals the death of opportunity.
My strength drained by the realisation that ive lost.
As my will is reduced to nothing, i wish for death.

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© 2009 demonofthefall
Published on Wednesday, June 10, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Withering petals On Thursday, June 11, 2009, Withering petals (68)By person wrote:

    "Unrelenting dread holding my body down as a new day signals the death of opportunity." So much in so few words - possibly a life time of running in place and a state of mind that's nothing short of immobilizing. Well written and very expressive. ~Withering~

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, June 11, 2009, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    despair......incarnate! well done............urban

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