[a lesson in jealousy] a fracture in gods work

By redtearswhitesnow

i cant get my head around it [you]
the halo that asphyxiates my pelvic bone
mourning the twisted rib [in me]
[in you]

my lungs gave up on me
[the moment]
that i needed them the most

i place the stars [one by one]
in the back of your throat
[in an attempt] to
mock the naked midnight sky

i cant get my head around it [you]
i feel slightly less narcissistic
[this time]
as i hand myself over to you
[in a moment]

when the stars [failed to understand]
and the naked midnight sky
[simply settled]

for

[you]

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© 2008 redtearswhitesnow
Published on Tuesday, October 21, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You're back.

  • redtearswhitesnow On Wednesday, October 22, 2008, redtearswhitesnow (79)By person wrote:

    After about 2 years,yes.Seems alot of the veterans are gone or hardly post.

  • A former member wrote: Mhm. This is wonderland, by the way. Or was.

  • redtearswhitesnow On Wednesday, October 22, 2008, redtearswhitesnow (79)By person wrote:

    Why the name change?It saddens me that Anidayz doesnt post anymore.She was one of my favorites here besides you and Amy.

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