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Blood Lines
By sueseagull
As I carve your name into my arm,
I feel the blood, it still is warm.
As life is drained, straight from my heart.
Remember dear you played your part.
The blood it drips, drop by drop.
I pray to God to make it stop.
But he can't do this, it's up to me.
To stop this madness, and then be free.
For blood is life, and I am drained.
The numbness kills both life and pain
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© 2008 sueseagull
Published on Saturday, August 23, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 24, 2008, sueseagull
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wrote:
sixsixnine, Thank you once again for reviewing my work. Sue
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On Saturday, August 23, 2008, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
the end it has to be good. great write
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A former member wrote:
I find myself in these words.. very interesting to see yourself in stuff like this. good write. welcome to DP
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On Saturday, August 23, 2008, sueseagull
(5) wrote:
Pleae Press Reset, Thanks so much for your kind words. Thank you also for making me feel so welcome! SUE
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