Suicide

By gloominous

Into this i must fall
leaving behind all i know.
he is dead, moving on to a new
hurting me, is all i know

the prettiest girl
i ever saw
sitting there, is me in awe
he loves her now
i'm a peice of meat
he threw me away
in my defeat.

Loving it all
sex is a game
he played with me
like a cat and a string
hurting me, loving it still
talking no more, to me at all.

Crying silent, in my bed at night
my pillow is soaked
i'm in fright
i've lost it all
the will to live
slitting my wrist
with my little saw.

They find me now
drained of life
my blood is gone
it stained the floor
the smell of me is all around
now i fall
into the ground.

Missing me
they cry and stare
my body is limp
my arms are bare
little slits
dance on my wrists
bringing me to
my final rest.

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© 2008 gloominous
Published on Tuesday, May 20, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • gloominous On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, gloominous (3)By person wrote:

    this is actually somthing i wrote about 8 years ago :P but ty for the words of encouragement

  • Pureheartless On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, Pureheartless (15)By person wrote:

    suicide isnt really a good title for a poem, not very original. you heard one cry for help you heard um all. you want people to feel sorry for you. the only thing we can do is give you words of encouragement. i wish you the best of luck with your situation meaning i hope it gets better for you. if you want we can chat over IM or email. my advice right now is have some tea maybe have a couple pancakes. if you feel depressed find something to do. if you cant find something to do and you feel like hurting yourself, teach yourself todo backflips, i actually find backflips to be quite a site for the eyes. nice write but come on, you know we all love you even if you dont know us, arnt we something to live for? and violet sometimes guys dont understand because the girl wont speak up and no we are not all the same :). i know its hard, confusing, and has moments filled with migranes, ive been there. just hang in there and be tough. -jake

  • A former member wrote: SOMETiMES GUYS JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY'RE DOiNG...YOU'RE BETTER OFF TO REALiZE THAT BEFORE BECOMiNG ENTANGLED EMOTiONALLY...GOOD WRiTE

  • A former member wrote: OMG i love it and im sorry if this is wat you are expirincing guys are jerks

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