Love, suicide, and the nothingness

By brie_leigh

You loved me
You tourtured me
You lead me to death
The nothingness of this world
And the everything life taught me
You took me
You tore me in half
And now you miss me
I cry
You beat me
I laugh with friends
You hate me
I cut
You love me
I dont understand
The pain you give me


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© 2008 brie_leigh
Published on Tuesday, January 15, 2008.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was so amazing and beatiful.great job. -cathy-

  • A former member wrote: this flowed so smoothe even though I felt the darkness in this piece. well done. ~ hdb

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