as if there is a problem?
By WhoIAM
i stand
smoking winstons
outside of the bar
music playing inside
folk,
dylan-esque with some overt hank williams
overtones
this girl,
vapidly beautiful,
talking to me about signs
she is a leo.
i listen to the last half of her rant
i am a aquarius,
i drop a line
she smiles and brushes back her hair
i am in.
it was almost to easy this evening.
failure was such a stable theme
as of late
and now here i am.
on top of the world?
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© 2007 WhoIAM
Published on Saturday, November 17, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
Yeah man you get favorited. Nice. Succinct with an overtone of melancholy and disbelief.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
come to think of it, i like you a lot. you're going to be on my favorites.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
you're so in there.