as if there is a problem?

By WhoIAM

i stand
smoking winstons
outside of the bar
music playing inside
folk,
dylan-esque with some overt hank williams
overtones

this girl,
vapidly beautiful,
talking to me about signs
she is a leo.

i listen to the last half of her rant

i am a aquarius,
i drop a line

she smiles and brushes back her hair
i am in.

it was almost to easy this evening.
failure was such a stable theme
as of late

and now here i am.
on top of the world?


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© 2007 WhoIAM
Published on Saturday, November 17, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Yeah man you get favorited. Nice. Succinct with an overtone of melancholy and disbelief.

  • Mari On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    come to think of it, i like you a lot. you're going to be on my favorites.

  • Mari On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    you're so in there.

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