rum

By sol

stagger wicked drunkard
oft hell tempt
an enervating quench
loathsome liquid
myself hath no repose
thence i belch and bestow
this vile film to see
make all of envy
impecunious than well

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© 2007 sol
Published on Friday, September 21, 2007.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Saturday, September 22, 2007, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    This is fun! (And I can never get enough rum. ;)

  • Army Barbie On Friday, September 21, 2007, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    im drink off rum right now!

  • sol On Saturday, September 22, 2007, sol (2)By person wrote:

    hopefully spiced rum with lime

  • Army Barbie On Saturday, September 22, 2007, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    Nope, just rum and coke. I like my Captain Morgan Spiced Rum too...but not like I like Malibu...oooohhhh I love malibu! And I'm sober this time :)

  • A former member wrote: methinks he doth protest too much; this was jolly zounds good

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