Comments by tonebone

  • "Phalanx I could wish you happier times as, I, a being possessing, to some degree empathy for my fellows but we both know these exercises are clap-trap and so forth..ad nauseam. The very well placed elements in this offering are not given to gain favor, shock or estrange although they might. I dont feel any are entertained when these personal declarations are uttered. I can't say for sure what you're looking for my friend but I don't think it's something as mundane as peace. There is a thing very similar in myself and it caused a smile. I'm not sure anyone could council such a dilemma and I'm sure they've tried. Eleven years is a long time my friend. A long time."
    Posted by tonebone on "Snapshot" by Phalanx
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