Comments by Queazenart

  • "There's a lot of great things being said in this piece. There's an overwhelming feeling of confusion and frustration that, in my experience, comes with growing up and getting lost while trying to find yourself... God, that sounds cheesy."
    Posted by Queazenart on "Somewhere New" by SilenttPerception
  • "Yes, dude! I love writing based on dreams! There's nothing weirder than the shit your head can come up with when you literally have no control over it. Might I suggest, though, dialing it back on the use of such uncommon vocabulary? It seems forced, like you're trying too hard to say something. Merely a suggestion. Anyways, hope to see more, and welcome to DarkPoetry!"
    Posted by Queazenart on "My Dream Last Night" by SilenttPerception
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