Comments by Queazenart
- "What a dark way of describing love. It is not a wholly positive emotion, but rather a complex and dynamic part of life that can make life worth living or just utterly suck, to be a bit frank. You did a good job of conveying that. The last four lines specifically express the negativity of the situation. It comes a little out of left field and leaves the reader feeling unsettled. I like it! Great job."
Posted by Queazenart on "No one needs to know" by Angelic Darkness
