Comments by NarcissusNarcosis

  • "she has fallen, but at last, is free....wow...I am in awe of this...deep...well-crafted...worded perfectly...flowing flawlessly...how do I compliment this..? I'll have to come back to it to truly express how great this is...amazing..."
    Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "She Has Fallen" by XxxHauntxxxMexxX
  • "This one hit me well....very relatable... I LOVE your ending though "..the demon is coming soon..." Well-written, structured perfectly...you have pulled me down, but once I hit bottom I will bounce back up and sting you badly..."
    Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Why don't you smile anymore?" by XxxHauntxxxMexxX
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