Comments by harlequinn

  • "I love this poem; it reminds me of my first relationship (metaphorically). I noticed, however, that you forgot the I in the sentence where you put the knife to her throat. Otherwise, there's nothing that could make this better."
    Posted by harlequinn on "Valentine's Day" by KuroiBara
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