Comments by Oliver Twisted
- ""Somewhere along the way God exploded into illegal things" I get the sense that God is the tycoon in this very Gothic looking city. I like your T.S. Eliot concepts of time. And as the reader I felt a longing for a treasure item and an inward introspective look at the psyche with symbols depicted on cave walls."
Posted by Oliver Twisted on "The Factotum Desert" by jonLyndon
