Comments by Cassette
- "I keep coming back to this, dear. The ending lines echo in my head. This is all I can think about today."
Posted by Cassette on "17" by hazydaisy
- "I don't know what was edited so I have nothing to compare it to... my only, only criticism would be a change in transition in: "so i ate her sadness. so i'm a sadgarden." I would change one of the "so's" but this is your heart on the page. just a thought."
Posted by Cassette on "17" by hazydaisy
