Comments by haunted
- "this poem is so fucking good! I love how you refer to the flesh being the emotion you come across, and the flesh is punished metaporically for not really being good enough for him, its genius how you told it. its filled with let down and your quest in poetry to make this a way to express your feelings to him while your thoughts seem unsure and almost regrettable. and its beautiful how you use it in a way to take it out on yourself by directing your regret to the very thing that could express yourself...your poems. reminds me of self harming, in a writing sense. but that's how I kinda saw this. idk, im all over this, its just amazing. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx
