"wow you got skills, your last poem kind of threw me. you know your way around. this is a kick ass poem, i loved it!" Posted by haunted on "Severed" by chococat_122
"not bad, not bad! short and sweet is good. the last sentence kind of fumbled a bit. this aint a contest and we just comment without judgement......sometimes! awesome umm attempt! lol." Posted by haunted on "The best failed attempt at poetry" by chococat_122
