Comments by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "To add further to what Anth mentioned about specific placement..the first two lines of the second main stanza are fantastic. The second line in particular, with a use of double alliteration on soft consonants...that's tricky right there. I'm keen on the idea too..."the journey" ...as cliched a metaphor as it is, it still rings true. Praxis, I guess we could call it...we can look in any direction, but really only travel in one."
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
